其锋，其锋藏书，请批
<P><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 16px">其锋：14*14mm<BR>其峰藏书：20*20mm</SPAN> <BR><IMG onmousewheel="return imgzoom(this);" onmouseover="if(this.resized) this.style.cursor='hand';" onclick="if(!this.resized) {return false;} else {window.open('attachments/month_0605/xuS35g==_sQpLdtocoomP.jpg');}" src="http://www.zgzkw.com/bbs/attachments/month_0605/xuS35g==_sQpLdtocoomP.jpg" onload="if(this.width>screen.width*0.7) {this.resized=true; this.width=screen.width*0.7; this.alt='点击在新窗口查看全图\nCTRL+鼠标滚轮放大或缩小';}" border=0> </P><P><IMG onmousewheel="return imgzoom(this);" onmouseover="if(this.resized) this.style.cursor='hand';" onclick="if(!this.resized) {return false;} else {window.open('attachments/month_0605/xuS35rLYyuk=_QygGApdK1Gd1.jpg');}" src="http://www.zgzkw.com/bbs/attachments/month_0605/xuS35rLYyuk=_QygGApdK1Gd1.jpg" onload="if(this.width>screen.width*0.7) {this.resized=true; this.width=screen.width*0.7; this.alt='点击在新窗口查看全图\nCTRL+鼠标滚轮放大或缩小';}" border=0> </P> 我很喜欢 <P>刻成这样已经蛮好了!!!<IMG src="http://www.cnssscp.com/bbs/images/Emotions/18.gif"><IMG src="http://www.cnssscp.com/bbs/images/Emotions/18.gif"><IMG src="http://www.cnssscp.com/bbs/images/Emotions/18.gif"></P>
<P>意见有点,我直言了,兄莫怪.第一方应取法吴昌硕,惜边框没见自然,两字也不太协调,其字最后两笔提在半空也有些考虑不周,建议多临几方印.</P>
<P>第二方明清流派印气息重些,惜整体琐碎留红太多,略散了些,不太见刀,有挖的感觉,原因应该是刻得太少!</P>
<P>已见兄在努力,咱们一起加油!!!<IMG src="images/Emotions/20.gif"><IMG src="images/Emotions/20.gif"><IMG src="images/Emotions/20.gif"></P> <P>第一方小弟建议"锋"字捺笔提起,"其"字两点落下.不知感觉可好.</P>
<P>粗白文不好刻,易臃肿,如刻的无变化,感觉就会象美术字了.</P>
<P>兄比小弟刻的好多了,学习了.</P> 原帖由 <EM>宝石蓝</EM> 于 2006-6-30 15:33:12 发表<BR>
<P>第一方小弟建议"锋"字捺笔提起,"其"字两点落下.不知感觉可好.</P>
<P>粗白文不好刻,易臃肿,如刻的无变化,感觉就会象美术字了.</P>
<P>兄比小弟刻的好多了,学习了.</P>
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<P>谢宝兄，我模拟了一下，好像比原来要好。不过"锋"字捺笔还未提起。</P><A href="http://www.cnssscp.com/bbs/upload/2006-6/30/20066301641162586.jpg" target=_blank></A><BR><BR><A href="http://www.cnssscp.com/bbs/upload/2006-6/30/20066301643043779.jpg" target=_blank><IMG src="http://www.cnssscp.com/bbs/upload/2006-6/30/20066301643043779.jpg" border=0></A><BR><BR> <P>用PHOTOSHOP做了个自己想法的章,处理的毛糙了."其"字有些偏左.大概就是这个意思吧.</P><A href="http://www.cnssscp.com/bbs/upload/2006-7/1/2006711038548749.jpg" target=_blank><IMG src="http://www.cnssscp.com/bbs/upload/2006-7/1/2006711038548749.jpg" border=0></A><BR><BR> 小弟班门弄斧了,初学篆刻,求知心切,应了那句"初生牛犊不怕虎了".不足之处请孙兄,阿龙兄直言指出.多谢了.<IMG src="http://www.cnssscp.com/bbs/images/Emotions/10.gif" width=20> <P>原帖由 <EM>宝石蓝</EM> 于 2006-7-1 10:45:57 发表<BR>小弟班门弄斧了,初学篆刻,求知心切,应了那句"初生牛犊不怕虎了".不足之处请孙兄,阿龙兄直言指出.多谢了.<IMG src="http://www.cnssscp.com/bbs/images/Emotions/10.gif" width=20></P>
<P><IMG src="http://www.cnssscp.com/bbs/images/Emotions/18.gif"><IMG src="http://www.cnssscp.com/bbs/images/Emotions/18.gif"><IMG src="http://www.cnssscp.com/bbs/images/Emotions/18.gif"><IMG src="http://www.cnssscp.com/bbs/images/Emotions/20.gif"><IMG src="http://www.cnssscp.com/bbs/images/Emotions/20.gif"><IMG src="http://www.cnssscp.com/bbs/images/Emotions/20.gif"></P> <P><IMG src="http://www.cnssscp.com/bbs/images/Emotions/18.gif"><IMG src="http://www.cnssscp.com/bbs/images/Emotions/18.gif"><IMG src="http://www.cnssscp.com/bbs/images/Emotions/18.gif"><IMG src="http://www.cnssscp.com/bbs/images/Emotions/20.gif"><IMG src="http://www.cnssscp.com/bbs/images/Emotions/20.gif"><IMG src="http://www.cnssscp.com/bbs/images/Emotions/20.gif"></P> <P>谢二位兄台鼓励,但还盼更多指正呀.<IMG src="http://www.cnssscp.com/bbs/images/Emotions/20.gif" width=20><IMG src="http://www.cnssscp.com/bbs/images/Emotions/20.gif" width=20><IMG src="http://www.cnssscp.com/bbs/images/Emotions/20.gif" width=20></P>
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